MY HOMETOWN
Hello, I will to introduce about my home town to you, there are many information you get if you read this written. before that I want to introduce my self to you. my name is aulia rizki,I was born 9 july in payakumbuh,I stay in there since 19 years ago. Then ,I want to explain the payakumbuh town,start with weather,foods,souvenir and tourist object etc. I am sure you will interested if you come there.
I will give information about the weather in payakumbuh. in there is very cold now,I do not know, why happen it ? long time ago there is warm,but not hot . i think it is global warming effect . so if you want visit you must wearing sweter. if you do not wearing it,you will get illness such as flu,dizzy, and fever.
payakumbuh is rich of foods,the example is batiah,bareh randang and galamai. that all is traditional foods in payakumbuh. you can not found it in anywhere except just in payakumbuh. it is govermant have plan for to export the kinds of food to foreign,I hope it is real plan . for to payakumbuh advance to good more.
payakumbuh is rich of foods,the example is batiah,bareh randang and galamai. that all is traditional foods in payakumbuh. you can not found it in anywhere except just in payakumbuh. it is govermant have plan for to export the kinds of food to foreign,I hope it is real plan . for to payakumbuh advance to good more.
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| BATIAH , picture from google.com |
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| GALAMAI, picture from google.com |
Beside that, payakumbuh have many tourist object,the example is harau canyon . it is a big canyon,full with mountain side,and the under will get some farm beside that we will found a waterfall
In addition we will found ngalau cave in balai panjang it is near with town center,in there any stalagtid and stalagnit . it is very enjoyable and very great . and payakumbuh govermant planning to build swimming pool in there and also another tourist object is batang tabik pool. i hope you will to get comfortable if you come there , and this information can help you for know more about payakumbuh town.
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| HARAU, picture from google.com |
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| NGALAU, picture from google.com |




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BalasHapusok rizki,
BalasHapusi'll comment on your essay..
#1. "I will to introduce about..."
i think you shouldn't add "to".
#2. "there are many information you get if you read this written"
you change with, "there are many informations you get if you read this essay"
because written means"penulis"
#3. don't began with conjunction word after dots..
but,
over all, you essay is good.
so.
keep writing to be better..^_^
i think your essay is good enough...
BalasHapusbut you still hve mistakes in sentence structure and dictions..
so, i think you still need to revise it and still need improvement..